River Afternoon

A Poem by Aimee Mahathy

Haiku

Among antique rock
The feathered one swims softly.
How far to dry land?

© 2009 Aimee Mahathy

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.	Awesome haiku which convey a simple but well thought idea Nice work Posted 16 Years Ago Awesome haiku which convey a simple but well thought idea Nice work Rating /100

Fabian G. Franklin

What a wonderful haiku. Actually this could be considered a senryu because it displays action in the text. Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Undying Glory

beautiful haiku i must say...simple yet just so elegant

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on November 29, 2009

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Aimee Mahathy

Terre Haute, IN

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I'm 36 now, much more settled into myself, and getting back to it again. The previous about me is gonna stay for now, since it's still somewhat accurate and I need some time to figure out what to say .. more..