Looking Glass Girl

blah, unfinished

Whatever you see,
Or think you see,
is nothing to you-
but everything.
It corrodes the mind
And poisons the soul,
Removing my limbs
And crippling me.

My eyes affixed,
Hues intermixed
With naked truths
And societal bricks
I humbly bow
And take commands
To hate myself
And love the mix.

Author's Note

I guess it's unfinished.... finished? I don't know. I don't even know if I like it. XD I only know it's the only thing I've written in a while... so yay!

Reviews

[deadly healer]

actually i like this piece the way it is. It is very different than the pieces i read. Very creative imagination girl.

-deadly healer

[Frantzuu]

great poem it flows damn well. lol awesome job.

[wolfshrew]

that second stanza is especially great, you should keep working on this piece.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Nah, don't hate yourself...hate the rest of the world if you have to but be good to you. Glad you are writing.