For Ely

The first poem that I wrote with comedy that went over well I was still obviously stuck on rhyme scheme though

I'm in love with a girl
with out a face
I know the name
and I know the place

she's crazy
I'm crazy too
we make a crazy, kinky
kind of love, us two

she a hardcore b***h
and she has no shame
I cant say I'm a hardcore b***h
the message would not be the same

but I guess I could
just for you
Ill be your hardcore b***h
If you want me to

Author's Note

I miss a lot of the friends I had online
I don't know how the community is on this site
but I hope I can make good friends here too

Reviews

[AngeloRosell]

I enjoyed this piece ! I found it entertaining as well as a fun read ! By the way I like your name ! Great job keep it up !