The Silver Lining

A concrete poem (in the shape of a cloud) about clouds and always finding the silver lining. Enjoy!! xx

Forever

Floating through the sky

Never stopping, never resting. To one it

Looks like a turtle, to another, a frog

Each person sees it differently. But when I look

Up and see it I’ll see the

Silver lining

Author's Note

Any reviews/ constructive criticisms welcome!

Reviews

[Olivia Marie]

Creative form. :) I like it :)

[filizakkaya]

this is really good

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I love the whole idea here. Well done in forming the cloud shape...the silver lining line fits right in naturally and the image comes through well. Watching clouds is a great way to get in touch with the inner child and let the mind associate. I liked it.

[SomeoneSomewhere]

thank you! I truly appreciate it:)

[SomeoneSomewhere]

Well done!
Never a ones vision
Can be the same.
And yours is
Perfect!

E.L.

[SomeoneSomewhere]

Thanks!

More than welcome :) E.L.