The Moonlight Pool

A lesson in being happy with what you've got (written in verses of haikus)

Silver streams of bright

Cascading gently in rivers

A pool of moonlight

 

The dark is quiet

Broken by trickles of light

Outlining a girl

 

A waiting tiger;

She crouches by the water sheet

And she hesitates

 

An audacious hand

Testing those placid waters

The mirror is cracked

 

Once a lovely face

Flanked by mane of moon-light hair

Shattered evermore

 

Author's Note

Any reviews are welcome!

Reviews

[Olivia Marie]

I find the wording to be amazing. Excellent use of diction. Your form is consistent. I think it's absolutely, and stunningly beautiful. :) Amazing!

[SomeoneSomewhere]

Thank you so much! I was really aiming to paint a vivid yet mysterious picture

[Olivia Marie]

You succeeded :D