Toward Torture

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Hurting is for the softhearted.
It shouts: I care, I care, d****t I care!
It turns to tantrum, stupor, and finally,
yes, to insanity:
incurably wounded to death.

Author's Note

'"n Mens is 'n mens deur mense"

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Emotively poignant in few words, placing a great weight of power upon the piece that through brutal honesty showers an array of vivid transformations. Like it.

[John Faulkner]

Great piece..you speak of inner strength over weakness..nice play of emotions

WELL DONE


JOHN