I Believe

Inspirational. It's what I truly believe everyday that I live

                                I Believe

I believe in a One true God and angels above

I believe in the act of forgiveness and unconditional love

I believe in beauty for ashes and His amazing grace

I believe in the true potential of our human race

I believe in having dreams and dreams coming true

I believe in making mistakes and starting anew

I believe in timeless acts of love and that Jesus saves

I believe in miracles and in truly being amazed

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

Hi Mystik. A beautiful write and testimony of what you believe. Heartfelt and introspective. Good flow and tone. Line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: aabbccde. A nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Good depth of feeling. Strong use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!

[Mystik]

Thank you very much! That is really nice of you. I really appreciate your input. Positive feedback is always very much appreciated, so thank you!

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome, Mystik. Have a great day!