Fates Trial

Just a short poem I wrote a few years ago...

If for only one day
I could find my own way
To let my anguish lay
Finding real reasons to pray
Not living in fear of today
With knowledge of the truth I could say
I will not hide away
This is my trial and I will stay
Fate is what everyone has to face someday

Author's Note

I am not good with grammar or the technicalities of writing. Please feel free to leave any kind of review. Thanks!

Reviews

[Wonderful Letdown]

Wow, good job!! I loved the rhyming and how determined you sound to face whatever may come. Really inspirational with the tone, it makes it sound as if in spite of it all, you are trying to LIVE happily. Nice work!!

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you think it was good!

[Tasha]

I didn't catch any mistakes. I thought this was a lovely poem about fate. Great piece!

[MystiqFairy]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work!

[Tasha]

You're welcome! I enjoyed it.