Energy

My mind is spinning

My heart is racing

You are the dream

I’ve been chasing

 

My soul alive

My spirit free

You are my love

My energy

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

The shortness of the poem actually somehow makes it even more energetic.

[Christine]

Great poem, I can feel the excitment of new love through your words.

[fionnaiscool]

i love it! it has a good rhythm. It touches the soul. You summed it up beautifully at the end. its true. when your in love, or think you are, or just ate chocolate ;) you are full of energy. this poem speaks right to the heart.

[Cassandra]

short sweet .. good one. I like the rhythm and rhyme :)

[Pointblank]

Oh, I Like this. New love does give such energy. An energy we crave when things get dull. Rhyming is great and simple. You said it so perfectly. Love it.

[HeavensAngel]

I love this poem, I'm all for love, love, love, its beautiful! Love does give us energy.:-)

Angel Love

[LadyRouge]

I really like this poem! Very short, but straight to the point. I like the title, "Energy." I like how you brought it all together by endding the poem with, "my energy."

[Dani California]

I love this! Love's energy.... is all we need.

Beautiful. Indeed...

[T]

An energetic poem indeed :) Beautiful! hugs