As A Woman

As a child I grew silent

As a teen I grew darker

As a woman I grow stronger

 

 

Reviews

[Pink Poison]

Wow, you say so much in so few words. Again, I can SO relate. Great tiny poem.

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I notice you entered this poem in the haiku havoc contest. I like the poem, but as a haiku, I'm not sure that it fits the form. I may be wrong, but as far as I know there is only one way to write a haiku, and that is for line one to only have five syllables, the second line has seven, and the third has five.
As it stands, your first line has seven, as does your second line, and your third has eight syllables. You may want to rework this.
Don't misunderstand, I like the poem, and I think you are saying something impactful and meaningful, but as far as haiku form, you may want to rework it.

[Staci Brown]

this is BRILLIANT!!! granted it's short but the emotions and experience shine thru your words! definitely going in my favs!

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[laceyjane23]

short but a good read! i like it!
laceyjane

[universalove]

I WISH IT WAS MORE . BUT THIS POEM IS TO THE POINT . NICE AND TRUE.

[Laura E. Aranda]

I wasn't expecting it to be this short. I enjoyed it and it is almost haiku material....I can't wait to get to your other work. I want to read it all. Thanks for sharing

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Short and sweet. Nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Chelsea]

This is beautiful and so simple :]