As I Cry

As I cry tonight

Each tear holds a pain

A separate moment

A thought

A dream forgotten

A lost love

A forgotten memory

A part of you

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

as i cry ,oh your tears are so special and dear each tells a story ...
A separate moment
A thought
A dream forgotten
A lost love
A forgotten memory
A part of you
thoughts and thoughts,lovely the words and thoughts

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

So visual, clear and creative. If only we could count the tears and give each a reason.

Very nicely thought and written.

[T]

Well written. Sometimes a good cry can help us to let go of the pain.

[Michelle Allende]

This is really neat. Keep up the creativity..

[A.M.P.]

Very sad, I love it. I love the building up to the last line; "A part of you." Beautiful job!

[Dalaina Renee]

Beautiful! Loved this!

[Disa Sig]

Beautiful. I can really capture the emotion.

[The Spaniard]

simplistic but beautiful, it drives right to the point and parks right on your heart. well done

[soulsearching]

Inspiring, sad, we all have these feeling as we age, but they are never lost, they are with us in our hearts forever.

[Bonnie]

This is a nice way to think about tears.

Each one captures one of the elements you've described.