Ripples

No clue

Ripples off the waters edge,

            Each a consequence for the interruption of calm.

 

           -Mysty Rayn

 

Reviews

[Bonnie]

Beautiful -- short and rich with meaning.

I hope you don't mind my attempting to do something similar as a Haiku

Ripples in water
Interruptions of the calm
View the consequence

[Pointblank]

pointblank and perfect.

[Pakino]

I think if you made this a Haiku it would have a nice effect. But overall it is great to read. Simple and short.

[Lestat's daughter]

Very nice