Appear

Appear

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

I do not glow with beauty

My pockets are empty

My heart is broken

I am not very smart

On the surface I appear together

In my depths I am shattered

 

But I could love you….

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


Author's Note

Mysty Rayn
I can't creat anything but rambling and babble these days...

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They say 50% of all relationships lack love, I think your saying your missing that 50% and this would make you complete, who ever you choose to love will be one lucky person, your talent comes from deep with in so that part is not missing.
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Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So real and humbling... we all have our faults and insecurities but love is still something we are all capable of.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Keep rambling please...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 14, 2008
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