If Only

If Only

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

If only I could hold you in my arms

 

You would never question me

Never doubt me

You would know how much I need you

How much I care for you

You would realize I can't live without you

Realize I am in love with you

 

If only I could hold you in my arms...

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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oh dazzle :)...
Love how you get a few lines to mean so much... And how so many ppl draw straight conclusions from it. There's all kinds of emotion and angst and paralelly thingies in those words, but mostly it's heart breaking and achy and desperate and a feeling a lot of us can relate to described so well... If only...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh dazzle :)...
Love how you get a few lines to mean so much... And how so many ppl draw straight conclusions from it. There's all kinds of emotion and angst and paralelly thingies in those words, but mostly it's heart breaking and achy and desperate and a feeling a lot of us can relate to described so well... If only...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so lovely Mysty...
sometimes it just takes a touch to say it all.

"Realize I am in love with you
If only I could hold you in my arms.."

those lines really speak to the heart..
great work as always.. :)


Posted 17 Years Ago


First, there is the connection of mind and spirit. Then the other will follow beautifully.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Being in the embrace of someone we love answers a multitude of questions and doubts we may have, it is the secure feeling and that one embrace that we can feel, whether or not someone cares, if only someday they invent something that could actually let us feel across miles, the true love of someone. I better get working on that one. lol
Antony

Posted 17 Years Ago


C'est exquis! Lovely. How such a simple a gesture means so much when you love someone . . . like I said, beautiful. Flora.

Posted 17 Years Ago


This is perfect tenderness, unveiled,
for true hearts.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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