Broken

Blah blah blah

I know you are broken.

Can I help you pick up the pieces?

Let me put your heart back together.

May I fill it with love?

Allow me to hold your hand.

I will walk with you.

Do not put your head down.

Gaze into my eyes.

Stop frowning.

I will kiss you a smile.

My arms want to rest around you.

Lay your head on my chest.

My heart beats for you.

Listen.

I know you are broken.

Let me help you pick up the pieces.

 

 

Reviews

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

This life is so fragile and can be broken at any time! There are 2 options in life when this great despair hits you:
1. Just give up on life and find a bridge somewhere and jump off
or
2. Dare to live on and rise above all of one's despair!
It's all very painful and change will not come with out pain!
But, what does not kill you always makes you stronger and tough times will never last but tough people will always do!
Greatness always comes out of the ashes of despair and defeat!
You must just stay alive to see beter days! I've been on that bridge and survived it all!
You can too!
Great write!
Loved your poem!
Keep writing form the depths of your soul for the good of all souls!
Always,
TIM

[Lyrical Love]

I can not read another one of your poems tonight...
tough, and tender-pulling at my heart strings.
Lay your head on my chest.
My heart beats for you.
Listen.
Great job!

[Imperfection]

I needed to hear this from someone who was broken himself.
We continue to remain that way...broken.

This is so full of warmth and care. Sometimes knowing that someone is there to hold your hand is enough to give you strength to heal yourself.
Powerful write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a very sweet and compassionate write... all it takes sometimes to help another heal a broken heart is another kind heart that cares for them...

Lay your head on my chest.
My heart beats for you.
Listen.

I really love those lines, thats like saying you want them as close as possible and share one common rhythm...
Such a beautiful write.