Paint A Picture In My Sky

My personal favorite.

Paint a picture in my sky,
Of a place I've never seen,
Hold my hand so deep in yours,
Give my mind something to dream,
Wish the trees would glow like stars,
Show me rainbows from the moon,
Efface all the tainting scars,
Whisper to make tulips bloom,
Paint a picture in my sky,
Take a bite out of the sun,
Color clouds like milky velvet,
Make rivers walk instead of run,
Take me dancing with the leaves,
Color flowers in my hair,
Paint a castle in my sky,
Tell me you'll be waiting there.

Author's Note

Written in 2007.

Reviews

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a charming poem. the title was really catchy. solid rhyme and meter..thoroughly enjoyed

[WhiteWolf]

Very lovely. Your play on words such as "walk instead of run" is quite clever. It has a good rhythm too.