MY LAST OBSESSION

Sitting on a rock
Staring at a stream
The moon senile
Giving me company

Winds hugging my hair
A horse kissing a mare
Raindrops rippling my skin

I SAT THERE..


OBSESSED WITH DEATH......

Reviews

[justread]

well this one was a sad piece though expressed very well!

[Stella Armour]

As John (Coyote) says, "Don't worry about death" ... it will come when the time is right and not before ..

[NEHA]

"death is dominating- it comes when it decided to"- somehow some scars cut too deep don't just realise it...

[Stella Armour]

it will only dominate if you allow it to....

[NEHA]

I agree!
;)

[sette]

and death is just the beginning of another journey

[Coyote Poetry]

Obsessed with death. Don't worry about death. Death comes, when death want. Better to think about the live things. Thank you Neha for sharing your words and thought.
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[NEHA]

welcome Coyote.
thanks for commenting!
keep reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Wild Rose]

Oh

I was hoping for > A lover > or a warm summer day

[NEHA]

This time you couldn't hit it right huh?!

[¿]

Evenly describes the position.......nothing difficult in imaging the scenario you wrote!! Even if in few lines.......😊
Mmm.....Ekdom chomotkar hoyeche Neha!!

[NEHA]

Dhonnobad tahsin...

[¿]

Shagotom Neha😊

[NEHA]

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