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Fl�neur.

Fl�neur.

A Poem by Natasha

She loves you

            Her breath

                        Her voice

                                    Her mannerisms

 

She is oozing and dripping, melting from the intensity of it all

Love                              consumes                            her

I love you  – I LOVE YOU!

My whisper and her scream are lost.

I understand.

Let me take my leave as she binds you.

A funny little fantasy I’ll be…

 

Watching as you run;
The games you insist on playing.
Stop. Before you fall.

 

© 2009 Natasha


Author's Note

Natasha
First two in a series of experiental poems.

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The form and title are very complimentary of each other. The way the first lines are laid out makes me think of a fl�neur who simply strides down a street, with these words running through their mind with each step they take. A slow gait, and then sudden epiphany and determined direction and the pace remains constant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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heart.
seriously.
well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing! The format was so unique. I especially love the ending:
"Watching as you run;
The games you insist on playing.
Stop. Before you fall."

Beautifully written!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The form and title are very complimentary of each other. The way the first lines are laid out makes me think of a fl�neur who simply strides down a street, with these words running through their mind with each step they take. A slow gait, and then sudden epiphany and determined direction and the pace remains constant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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