"You confuseth me."

Dear vain one, this one, for once, isn't for you.

The discovery of a wall
Most imposing
Has pertubed me
The front is a mirror
It is formed of glass
So behind it I'll stay

 

No one will find me
It's fine
I like to watch
As things unfold
I prefer to listen
To all the words
So I'll sit here

 

I will remain alone
Strange
This thought
It bothers me
I cry every day
I cannot stand it
Let me drift off
So I can leave

Author's Note

I just needed to write.

Reviews

[Steve]

Hey, you write really well, I think this is my favourite piece of yours. Well constructed, simple and interesting, a good read

[Greg Skura]

Observing can be more refressing than being part of the action! Very Nice

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very descriptive, but vague at the same time! It leaves the reader wondering(along with your "author's note" and your quote at the beginning, about the whole story. But it still was written very well.......

[Dietrich von Crowe]

I just watched that movie, "Mirrors," too. Why the 6 lines, then 7, and then 8?

[Charles D. Moorer]

What did I miss here?

[The Reticent Receptioni..]

i really really like this. :D