Crimson

A Poem by NaCl

A crimson petal

Cups the morning dew

Tender as a mother

As lovingly to

A single crimson drop

From the wrist of a girl

Pale as snow

Crimson cheeks

Burn and tighten

Teeth clench

Fists tense

Crimson has so many places

It can travel to

But my favorite place

Is on the cheeks of you

© 2011 NaCl

Author's Note

Meant to be happy and a bit silly :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Reviews

Sleeping Maiden

Awwww!! wow, so sweet and has this romantic feel to it. I love the flow and the imagery here. Beautiful. Great write!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

KAREN

Really sweet and flows well!

Posted 14 Years Ago

newyearnorma

i really like this poem

Posted 14 Years Ago

SwagMaster

Cute!

Please mark this constructive, and review me back!

Posted 14 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stats

261 Views
4 Reviews

Added on November 3, 2011
Last Updated on November 3, 2011

Author

NaCl

Somewhere under the rainbow

About

Hi! I'm a soon-to-be thirteen year old poet, my life ambition is to becoma a world famous author/lawer. My favorite poems are ones that make yoou think, but are not depressing. I have OCD and mild fib.. more..