These Walls - Phoenix

He rages toward the unfathomable distance above;
Fields ablaze below, sky patterned above, thoughts razed within,-
-resolve sundered throughout.

He reaches out - flesh fails; burns away [but why?].
Caterwauls rule these cracked-chipped walls.

 

Still yet, he may rise.

And; he returns, again.

Fate burns violently inside.

He has risen once more.

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[Butterflymom]

This is a very beautiful piece. I enjoyed the imagery, and the layering of this write. It is absolutely awesome! I'd like to read more of your writing in the future..........keep up the wonderful work!