My views on love

MY VIEWS ON LOVE

There was something I began to miss,

It remained just some things,

Coz there were many things I missed.

Lots of things I got to say,

But got no shoulder to lay.

My feelings remained till myself,

Coz there's no one who could understand me my way.

People say love till you live,

I think they don't know;

YOU DAILY DIE...IF YOU LOVE, TILL YOU LIVE.

Rather be loved, instead of loving;

Coz you gain love, instead of giving.

Lucky are those who find someone

Who be loved, however they are,

They feel they are together;

Even if they are far.

Find someone who loves you for who you are,

Search for a pretty heart, instead of a pretty face.

It is the morals of a person which remains,

Sometimes a pretty face may lead to disgrace.

Look for the nature of a person not looks,

Because if you love a person for its nature,

Love is what, you retain.

Reviews

[AshlynnStyx]

Inner beauty is the best kind. We age and grow frail. Our personalities stay.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes that's what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Find someone who loves you for who you are,
Search for a pretty heart, instead of a pretty face."
The above lines are real wisdom. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. Iam glad to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the poem and you are welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Truth lies in each line of the poem well written saher, its superb

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Surya]

If at all this happens, what you said you are granted with a treasure....

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read.

[Abraham George]

you are making your emotions into poems and it is very hurting.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes cause nothing soothes me more than writing down my emotions when I am feeling low. It really gives me so much relief thinking maybe my emotions were worthy because I could write well. Then suddenly, I feel relieved. Thank you so much.

[Valentine]

A true heart is a found treasure. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Well said. Thank you so much :)

[wordman]

you are right,what comes from the heart is all that matters

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah Thank you so much.

[Sikandar Khan]

hehehehe isay kethay ha jab Apna. Pyar ko sahe say samja Nehe hOta Jb smj jatay Ho to revised version likh daltay ho

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahaaha you caught me. Sahi hai. Thank you so much

[Sikandar Khan]

hehehehehehehe Chalo Hnasi To Ae Tmhay.....

[SZHZIA]

"Find someone who loves you for who you are,

Search for a pretty heart, instead of a pretty face.

It is the morals of a person which remains,

Sometimes a pretty face may lead to disgrace.

Look for the nature of a person not looks,

Because if you love a person for its nature,

Love is what, you retain."

I have no words to say somethings more on your though of love that you have nicely worded in this poem. Every line that I have quoted in this review, has stolen my heart and are so touching. I agree with every words of these lines. You prefer to the spiritual love and the purity of heart rather than face or physical beauty. I support your thoughts.

You have worded a beautiful thoughts. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. :)
Best
Szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah...thank you so much :)

[Deep]

I like the line "You daily die if you love till you live" really nice poem. I have same views, keep writing...