Planet we live in

Someone tell me what is acceptable in this world.

PLANET WE LIVE IN 

What will it be like to travel to another world?

Will there be life, plants and seasons?

What if you are only person living there?

How would you spend your life when there is no one to share?

What if you be a pioneer to that planet?

Will you live happily then, thinking you own the world?

It is always good to have a company don't you think?

Then why people build up walls and separate themselves from the world?

Why is that people want to be famous?

And the world they want to own,

You can leave an impression in this world,

If you do good deeds enough to help the needy.

What is the use to store in lots of money that you can't even keep a count of it?

Tell me, Who has become ever successful if he is greedy?

What is wrong with the world we are living in?

What is the use to suffer if you can't change a thing?

Reviews

[boygene borice]

great insight. Our world is much corrupted by gullible and greedy people. Wealth is never earned through greed but by giving

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much for reading I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Michael X]

dam.. so insightful, so ponder-ful, the words float with an air of consciousness and understanding, the what ifs and whys, what is right and what is wrong, you open the mind with this exploratory piece of heart.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am feeling widely elated to know that you liked it.

[wordman]

lovely write,i guess it`s the spirit that we carry inside of our hearts that dictate our lives

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you. Thank you for reading :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is really made me curious to visit one of the other planet, very good idea and very well written.

[Najam Us Saher]

I also once wanted to visit a planet or explore space. Thank you for reading :)

[Surya]

A question and a message you just dropped here, I loved it....It's wrong with the thinking capacity of humans, I feel like.
Thank You dear for sharing...

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you for reading :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh Outsanding powem With Great Message And Great Description........Hats Off To You......

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)