My revised views on love

MY REVISED VIEWS ON LOVE

You might wonder what it feels like to be in love,

Oh it does feel so enchanting and happy,

But wait till love shows you its true colours,

You will feel like its a sacred sin.

When firstly touched by the poison of love,

It doesn't affect a thing,

But as the time grows,

You might want to break those strings.

For all those who are happy in love are happy and blessed,

For all those who feel love is a sweet poison it is a curse.

It doesn't take time for love to change your views about it,

Love is just a lovely word, 

Pray that you don't get touched by it. 

Life is a lie if you believe love to be a happy ending one,

Journey of love will drive you crazy and will leave you feeling none.

Open your eyes before a heartbreak does,

Is love true or just a curse?

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Love is a tangible thing while closing your eyes. It is total uncertainty. I love this one.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Love is the most complicated things in love, love gets murdered by our ego sometimes..but love is the most beautiful thing in the world when you find the perfect match to you...apart this. The poem is very good

[Najam Us Saher]

I completely agree with you. It feels so beautiful and amazing to be in love to have someone. This suffering doesn't change my views totally but it gave me a different possibility and perspective. Thank you so much.

[Surya]

Everything in world feels good for only time and slowly it changes, if you cross this barrier you will find the exact definition......
I guess love is the only curse which we enjoy and love but it is poison affecting emotionally after a break......if you win the poison there is no other wound you suffer...

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you. Thank you so much.

[Abraham George]

no i won't agree with you.

Life is a lie if you believe love to be a happy ending one,

i wish in your case it should be a happy ending

[Najam Us Saher]

I also just hope so...Thank you for reading.

[Abraham George]

mm ok and no need thanks between friends. Hope we are

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah.......

[Abraham George]

a gentleman hug for you as a friend

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahaha :D Thank you. I am fine.

[Valentine]

Love is a precious gift from God, we have to learn to accept and treasure it. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you but there are also very complications and heart aches. Thank you for your time. I appreciate it.

[wordman]

when cupid shoots that arrow of love it brings bliss from above

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you for reading.

[Sikandar Khan]

Ahm Ahm Wa Kamal Ha Abi Love Feel Honay Laga Jo Jo Hota Apnay To Apni Feelings Pr Poem Likh Dali Mien Likhnay Laga To Books He Likh Dalungaaa Heehehe Kamal Ho Ap B Har Cheez Pr Poem asi Bnati Ho Samaj AAAJATI ha Har Aik Words Say Feelings

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ab me kya kahu

[Sikandar Khan]

Meray khyal say ap asa kro apnay mind ko fresh kro abi starting ha zuada dimag pr na l. Warna meri trah dinagi mareez ban jaogi apnay donag k. Divide kro dusri cheezo k. Traf dhyan lgao thora sa mind ko relax kro