A Silver Night

With the moon and the stars.

A SILVER NIGHT

It looks all dark yet bright,

The water shines in the moonlight.

The cold wind shivers me,

My tears you could never see.

It appears all silver, in this lonely lane,

I have fallen in love with you,

Is it a boon or a bane?

Standing alone and watching the lake,

Wishing you were by my side,

I think about the promises you made,

It's still unfulfilled and my feelings I cannot hide. 

It feels my throat has been choked by the cold wind,

I cannot utter a single word,

I have a conscious mind which only thinks about you,

And a stupid, silly heart who still loves you. 

I walk alone all the way to my home,

With those nostalgic memories of us in my mind,

I have lived each day in remembrance of you,

And feel like I have to sleep gazing at the moon that shines.

I am dying each day waiting for you,

How I am spending my days you have no clue.

My hope is fading and so are my memories,

I just hope I never forget those good things about you.

Reviews

[Abraham George]

My hope is fading and so are my memories,

don't loose your confidence and be patient , if you love him that much he will definitely come for you. I can understand your True love so he can't?

I am darm sure that he love you more than you loving him. But give him his time and let him come . be bold and courageous at this moment and don't loose your hope.

"My hope is fading and so are my memories,
I just hope I never forget those good things about you."

These lines are really heart breaking for me . I know the situation you are going now. i wish to be a good friend near you to give you more confidence and a shoulder to weep.
A gentle man hug for my friend

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Thank you so much for such solacing words. They are truly appreciated. Yes you are right all I can think are just maybes...Thank you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

We shall hold on tight to the need and memory of love.
"My hope is fading and so are my memories,
I just hope I never forget those good things about you."
I do understand the above lines. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading Sir. I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like and you are welcome.

[Sikandar Khan]

So Nice Roamntic Poem.......

[Najam Us Saher]

It would be romantic when we would be together. Thank you so much for reading. :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Ohhh I Will Pray You Will Be Together With Him Soon

[Najam Us Saher]

In Shaa Allah Aamen....

[Sikandar Khan]

oh Helllo Meray Liay B Dua KrDena..

[Najam Us Saher]

Haan In Shaa Allah zarur. ☺

[wordman]

love,sweet dreams of a fallen love,hoping to reunite before the fire goes out..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Its beautiful and romantic very well penned..saher

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I feel it would be romantic when we would be together. Thank you so much for reading. Truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Agnibo]

One of the best poems I've ever come across. :) Great!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it. I am feeling really happy to know that you liked it. :)

[Agnibo]

Yes! I liked it very, very much. It touched me! So alluring piece. You are most welcome, Najam. :)