Just tell me

JUST TELL ME 

Did you come across those days,

When you feel low for no reason?

When every little noise hurts you,

And laughter causes you irritation.

Do you feel such?

When you get really annoyed on everyone,

And every little thing they do, hurts you so much.

Tell me I am not the only one who feels this way,

Tell me sometimes it is fine not to feel okay.

Even the silence bothers the same way like noise,

I feel no difference in sadness and joy,

Every feeling in me faded away,

Time heals everything they say.

When will that time come?

Days are turning to years,

I am still in that same place,

There is no one to wipe my tears.

Tell me it is okay to feel like this,

Tell me I am not the only one.

Tell me that you feel the same,

Tell me I am not the one to blame. 

Reviews

[Abraham George]

So depressed?
There is no one to wipe my tears.
please remember the words i told you that i have two hands to...........and shoulders...........

i just intentionally avoided some words .I think you will understand . i wish our secret should be stay with in us.

i feel sad about your situation you going through.
Please try to find happiness in everything even in hard times

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....I understand your words. Yep that's the only way to be happy to find hidden happiness in everything that I do.☺ Thank you so much.

[Valentine]

When we feel sad and blue, like no one cares, I talked to God. He is always there and He loves us. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right....Thank you so much ☺

[Nismo]

This is great! I especially liked the final part of it. Phenomenal job, keep up the good work and take care!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it ☺

[Darling]

Lovely piece. It really captures the hopelessness we a feel at time in our life. Darling.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...Thank you so much I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Mr.Writer]

Fabulous job! Emotional, engaging, beautiful, powerful...
Wow

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it ☺

[Mr.Writer]

No problem

[Surya]

Yeah your are not the only one, time is only thing that heals says everyone but its you, if you wanna come out of it, struggle with your brain to come out.....Yeah you are not the only one, i was once the same....I assure you will be better than anything once you come out....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such comforting words. I appreciate it ☺

[Surya]

You are welcome..:)

[Sikandar Khan]

Saher I Am In Same Condition So Much Ajeeb Halat Hue Ha Kuch Dino Say Ajeeeb Ajeeb Guzrata Sara Din

[Najam Us Saher]

Kyu kya hua ? And thank you......

[matrixmark]

The opening line of do you come across those days, had me answering with a big 'YES for the next number of lines.
The time of time heals - it is true, but the keyword is axactly just that - 'time'
It felt like a rollecoaster on just a downward track, but then WE ALL do eventually pick ourselves up and see the sunshine once again.

A great poem, but sad to read (if you know what I mean)

Mark.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Zoya]

Yeah you're not the only one for sure...I really admire your quality of exactly writing down what you're feeling. If only I could write this way...Anyway, I loved it! Thanks for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Everyone has their own speciality. I admire you for writing Crooked house. ☺ Thank you so much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it.

[Zoya]

Yeah, thx :) And you are welcome!

[Agnibo]

I can totally relate to it right now. I am feeling the same. :( No! You are not the only one. *High-five*

And, the poem is just phenomenal. The way you expressed all your emotions in the piece is just awesome. I am touched!!
Thanks for the read request, Najam. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome and I thank you so much ☺

[Agnibo]

You are welcome. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowww such a lovely poetry, that's good write saher, I really liked this specially the last three lines they were awesome.

Tell me it is okay to feel like this,

Tell me I am not the only one.

Tell me that you feel the same,

Tell me I am not the one to blame.
We all want someone to be with us and hold our hand but the truth is we gotta fight alone..

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes exactly.....Thank you so much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it. ☺