Her fate

Wrote this for a contest.

HER FATE

She walked in grace and beauty,

Losing all her hope and happiness.

She hid her beast which was inside herself,

Who knew she was so much in pain and distress.

Her good deeds done were ignored,

And everyone pointed out her mistakes,

Like the roses covered in thorns,

She was beautiful from within,

But also had some flaws.

She felt there was nothing good in her,

Her peace was stolen and so was her identity,

She seeks a chance to change her destiny. 

Reviews

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[Najam Us Saher]

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[Anjali]

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