Sometimes

SOMETIMES

Sometimes we let go the things we love,

We make mistakes, we fall, we lie above.

Sometimes we try hard to make life perfect,

We realise, we apologize; after we regret.

Sometimes we feel life will fall into place,

We try harder than we could, just to catch the pace.

Sometimes we are helpless and tired of trying,

We sit back and hope, life will be worth living before dying.

Sometimes we smile when we are dead inside,

We force it, which leads to a misguide.

Sometimes we are fed up and want all this to end,

We break the barriers and become weak to bear life's bend.

Sometimes we want things so badly,

We make an effort to achieve it exactly.

Sometimes we are left with unaccomplished dreams,

We lay emotionless in tears with silent screams.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Such wonderful words from a good writer. You painted all the sometimes in life that it will be forever true always.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Najam Us Saher]

That's really so kind of you to think good about my poems. I cannot thank you enough. Stay blessed. ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. It is our decisions to reach for dreams and our decisions to forget them. I liked the honest tone and the directness of words and the thoughts. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for appreciation, it means a lot to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Rassoul]

Good one, Najam!

Keep going.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading this. ☺

[wordman]

i guess it`s just life,great description

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, life is all about the ups and downs. Thank you very much. ☺

[Priyanshi]

Really true and relatable. A lovely write, dear... Loved the rhymes along with the whole poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really glad that you liked this. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. ☺

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Najam.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Relatable..this is lovely and I loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

I am happy to hear that you liked this, you have my greatest gratitude. ☺

[Zoya]

Very relatable. Sure all of us have felt that way. I liked the rhymes. Good job!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much ☺

[Zoya]

My pleasure

[Wajiha Nayeem]

so true...u hv shown reality...good work..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. I mean it...

[sameer]

motivational ,fantastic,deep thinker.......golden words,gud one

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much... :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree with Schzia about the difference in your description and the write, though this is very well written.
Have you considered breaking this piece in line breaks as stanzas? Since you're using a rhyme scheme of aa, bb, cc..., it would read nicely if you did. Also I think you can't really be 'emotionless in tears' ;P
Nice attempt.

[Najam Us Saher]

That was an oxymoron. I will try breaking this in stanzas. Thank you so much 😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:p you're welcome (: