Stay

What would you say when you talk to the person you love for the last time?

STAY

In another life,

I will stay,

I am sorry my mum,

I had to go away.

I cannot forget your pleads,

How you begged me to stay with you,

I am helpless,

I cannot be with and without you.

I understand if you cannot forgive me,

I had no other way,

I am not so privileged to hear for the last time

What you have got to say. 

I pray to be with you in heaven,

At least there I want my wish to be fulfilled,

Not in this life but another,

I will stay. 

Please understand the situation,

For which I am gone,

Not in this life but another,

I will stay with you for long.

I am helpless,

I have no other option,

My words have no meaning

without the pain of losing you.

I am sorry my mum,

I am going away,

With you is the only place

Where I cannot stay. 

Forgive me, for I had to go,

Understand my situation,

This is life I feel,

With all serious complications.

My heart is heavy in your love,

Still, I feel empty inside. 

It was with you that I felt above,

Before dying, I have already died. 

Reviews

[Zoya]

A power packed ending. You conveyed emotions well. Good work!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much Zoe. 😀

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Wao
I loved the last line

Thankyou for this piece

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Such deep emotional visions. It flows so well. great write.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind words and the visit. It means a lot.

[Amrita]

I feel like reading it again and again :) so much emotions :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. It means so much to me. 😀

[Amrita]

Pleasure :)

[Mavericks]

What's your Sunsign? You sound like Libra.

[Najam Us Saher]

Scorpio. And what's yours?
By the way, thank you for reading.

[Mavericks]

Virgo here.

[SheWhoFeelsNothing]

My heart is heavy in your love,
Still, I feel empty inside.
It was with you that I felt above,
Before dying, I have already died.

I just love this and the last two line really got to me. The whole poem is written with deep feelings and emotions.

From how I see this poem is about how you are forced to do something completely different than what your heart really wishes for! And how life can be so unfair sometimes.

I really love this poem. It’s just so touching!

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely right. Circumstances forces us to be away from the ones we want to be with. Thank you so much for such kind words, it means a lot.

[SheWhoFeelsNothing]

Your welcome. :)

[wordman]

i`m sure a lot of people will relate to this touching write

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right Sir. Thank you so much.

[Kayla Amaro]

Wow...again, you proved to have such a beautiful way with words. Very emotional writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading, I am happy that you liked this. Much appreciated :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's like they don't only just leave us, rather they take a part of ourselves with them and we're left clutching that empty space, breathless...
Such an emotive write, certainly has nostalgic feels for me.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, that feeling is hard to be dealt with.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I respect them.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

So it is...you're welcome 😊

[Shweta]

All the extreme emotions have been conveyed and have been understood😊

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that they did. Thank you so much☺

[Shweta]

Most welcome:)