Flawless

FLAWLESS

Even broken things are beautiful to look at,

There is beauty in a face that doesn't smile.

Not everything is meant to be perfect,

Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed. 

Look beyond, look above,

There lives a soul without life,

Tell her, make her believe that she is alive.

Despite all the negativity

And all the fruitless efforts,

She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.

After all that has happened,

Her hope died, but her desire to live remains.

Make her believe, even broken souls are beautiful too.

Her life all messed up, her destiny all tied,

She feels that she has no beauty, 

Because life took away her smile.

Make her believe that a face which doesn't smile is happy too.

She claims she is imperfect, 

She has never done anything right in her life,

Talk to her, make her believe, 

That she is flawless even in her imperfect life. 

Reviews

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Very beautifully written. You know how things have changed now and a lot of people around us, known ones and the unknowns are the victim of feeling worthless. And they look for something to make them feel better, but it's hard to find something like that. This poem of yours could work that way. Believe me, you might have helped some people already by sharing this.

Thank you so much for sharing such a great poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel overwhelmed to hear that. Thank you very much for such kind words. Much appreciated.

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You're welcome :D

[Anjali]

'Not everything is meant to be perfect,
Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed '
This is pure creativity. It's beautiful, like I really mean it. It really made me feel something, and that something is just amazing! I love love love this piece. The truthness in it and the rhyming scheme, just perfection. You were born to write! Keep writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

You have no idea how happy you made me feel. Thank you very much. I am speechless.

[Anjali]

What are you talking about? You make every reader speechless..😂😂😂. You're welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah, how sweet of you 😁😄

[Red Rose]

This poem is something I need in my life right now.. Half of the current generation are victims of feeling worthless, as am I. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem..

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy that I have written something what you wanted. Also, I agree with you I am one of them.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, forgot to say. 😁

[Giulia King]

Beautifully penned, dear Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I wrote this just after seeing the image on which I commented. I was mesmerised by the image and the first line I wrote thinking about the Colosseum. Thank you very much for reading :)

[Giulia King]

Aww WOW! You have no idea how happy that makes me! Look, how elegant and wonderful the words are coming out from you just by looking at a picture. I hope you get to go there one day and really feel the magical air :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh, I have immense love for traveling. I have visited almost every place in my country, but never got a chance to visit out of this country. Thank you for such a wish you made me happy too 😀

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Wao beautiful
I just loved every line of your Piece.........

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. You made me happy 😀

[Avia]

I love this. Nobody can ever be perfect and everyone is potentially beautiful in their own way. If only everyone thought like this.

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly, thank you very much for reading.

[Abraham George]

i didn't like this. I told you many time that she is( You are) beautiful and perfect. Don't think that she is imperfect. She is absolutely a precious gift .
Gift don't know it's own value. The people who got the gift knows the value of the gift. She is a gift so she don't know how valuable she is. Those who have her as a gift knows how much she valuable to them.

Words and way of writing is good like all other your works.

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you. It is hard to believe you know where I am surrounded by people with.
Thank you very much for honest view. Much appreciated :)

[wordman]

she is beautiful,she is flawless,,now give me a big smile

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words really did make me smile. Thank you so much for such kind words ☺

[Gejodi]

Perhaps a "Flawless poem...sad to think that there are so many lost imperfect souls that judge themselves by what others see through their own tainted lense! Good job

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautifully summed up, thank you so much for sharing your views and reading mine :)

[Amrita]

loved every word of your beautiful composition. So relatable :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy that you liked this. Thank you so much 😀