Till There Are

Reality of life

TILL THERE ARE

Till there are clouds in the sky, 

There is rain.

If there is happiness in your life, 

There will be pain.

Till there are seeds in the soil, 

There are trees. If there is a storm in your life, There will be a gentle breeze.

Till there is sun and moon,

There are days. 

If there are critics in your life, 

There will be people who will praise. 

Till there are seasons in nature,

There are dry lands and puddles. 

If there are beats in your heart,

There will be struggles.

Reviews

[Kaye]

this is really beautiful, enjoyed the read

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you.

[Ace Jaxon]

This is very beautiful and I think it describes life perfectly, keep up the beautiful work, I hope to read more.

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure. Thank you very much.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

What a beautiful rendition on life
Beautiful
So amazing

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Beautifully worded as always

[Najam Us Saher]

Glad to see you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Najam.
"There are days.
If there are critics in your life,
There will be people who will praise.
Till there are seasons in nature,
There are dry lands and puddles.
If there are beats in your heart,
There will be struggles."
The above lines, honest and true. No easy life for many. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Oh yes Najam, You always show me light with your writings,

Lovely piece!

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me happy with your words.

[A.H.]

well penned thoughts, true words. happiness and pain are two sides of the same coin, so are our lives. enjoyed reading it, thanks.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for your insightful review.

[Susan 🦋]

And so are the ways of life this side of Heaven. The season's shift along with the blessings are heartache. You captured that in this write. Well done. :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading :)

[wordman]

we live in all seasons,we endure if you wont a rain bow you must have rain,,if you wont love you must endure the pain

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Chris Shaw]

Life is a roller coaster. Some of it will be plain sailing and some of it will be riding the crest of a wave in a storm. For the days you are happy, be sure there will be days of sadness too. Accept the rough with the smooth. All things pass. Thank you for sharing.

Chris

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you. Thank you for your insightful review :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)