Teenage Times

Journey of every teenager

TEENAGE TIMES 

Those were the times
When wrong seemed right
Crossing limits on different heights
Where seriousness was kept aside
My teenage memories- I recite.Fake smiles were easily misunderstood
Living under the belief that I am no good
Rush of emotions, changing moods
Living a little better then, wish I could.Always lived under stress
Believed that I am a mess
Piled up emotions made me distressed
Bearing the agony inside,
Spent days being depressed.Too much negativity never became right
Every day was the same, happiness out of sight
I lost my confidence on different heights
Every day I struggled to win my fight.Hoped someday life would be better soon
Sleepless I stayed observing shifts in the moon
'I accept the way I am and I am happy'
I presumed
Even though I tried to be happy, sadness resumed.Seeked something that kept me alive
Disastrous it was to be so naive
In my loneliness deeply I dived
For a bit of happiness, I was deprived.

Reviews

[Gabby The Gab]

I really admire how raw and honest this poem is. You’ve captured the emotional chaos of teenage years so well—the confusion, sadness, and silent battles that so many people can relate to but rarely express this clearly. The repetition of themes like emotional struggle and longing for happiness creates a strong emotional rhythm. Thanks for this Najam, great right!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot to me♥️

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A fine impressive poem on teenage and its ups and downs . You rhymed it all superbly in poetic style . Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. Sure will read.

[Rassoul]

Seeked something that kept me alive
Disastrous it was to be so naive
In my loneliness deeply I dived
For a bit of happiness, I was deprived."

You play with words really beautifully, keep up the hard work.

And also i hope you find happiness in your life.

[Najam Us Saher]

I wish the same for you. Thanks a lot for reading and leaving a beautiful review :)