Rapunzel

I wrote this in what was apparently a silly mean streak.

I'm not sure where this came from.  I thinking I was typing up my AIM profile once and put down, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel..." and that's what followed in just a random moment of writing.  When I finished that stanza I grinned and cackled, wondering what the worst thing I could threat Rapunzel would be.  In the end I threatened to chop off her hair and, well, there goes her shot at Tila Tequila...I mean love.

 

Really has no reasoning, as I said.  Just a random poem.

 

Picture credit to Macchina.

 

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Rapunzel, Rapunzel,

Let down your long hair.

If you do not,

I shall give you a scare.

 

I'll throw up some scissors

And hope that they land

With a delicate snip

On that small elastic band.

 

Your hair will all tumble

From that window way up high.

Triumph will please me

While your heart heaves great cry.

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

This is adorable!
I love it!

Just what the silly rhymes contest is all about!

Great job!

~Frances~

[Jessica{is inspired by ..]

That's cute! The rhym fits with it quite well, it seems almost lyrical.

Very amusing. There weren't any grammatical things that I picked up on. I liked it, it's like a fairy tale gone slightly wrong, stupid princess can't always get her way, right?

Overall, well done!