Lost piece, found again

I lost a piece of me in you
I think I left it in your arms
I forget the reasons I got scared
But remember that I cared quite a lot

You see, lately I've been on my own
Yeah one, but one by choice
You see that's a first for me, this only me
And I realize for once, it's just me

It's just me
It's just me and I'll find a way to make it
There's no one left to stop me
Here I go
Can we take it from the top?

So what?
So long
I wanna be strong
Don't try to take this from me
I've already spent my life living half undone

I've been finding out that I have what this world is called friends
I've tried to push them all away
They push me back and wanna stay
And that's one good thing I have

I'm gonna fill a piece of me
I'm gonna feel at home
I'm gonna make this cloud above me disappear
I wanna feel a punch inside
My heart beat on the floor

Yeah, It's just me
It's just me and I'll find a way to make it
There's no one left to stop me
Here I go
Can we take it from the top?

So what?
So long
I wanna be strong
Don't try to take this from me
I've already spent my life living half undone

It's me the one who won before
I used to smile but don't no more
I'm living just to watch it all go by

Reviews

[Shikela]

Wow this is deep and so refreshing keep writing.

[zainul]

You have expressed vividly what you want.
Go ahead.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Don't try to take this from me
I've already spent my life living half undone"
I like the thoughts in this poem. Good to begin again and leave the bad stuff behind. I like the compete poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[jennifer little]

i liked this poem good job

[Alex Vidmar]

I don't know your name, but this is your best work to date, Namelezz. This is absolutely amazing. I love it. Keep me posted.

~Alex.

P.S. Would you mind reviewing some of my works? I'd appreciate it if you do. Thank you in advance if you do. This is going into my library.

[FallenHeroXx]

You've grown in your writing. Quite alot really. Keep it up.