Reborn

Although I am still young, I have seen a lot of people change through my years, especially those who have changed for the better, to become happier with the ones they love.

I am reborn

Through your eyes

A soul

Forged

From the essence that once was

Who I am

A child

To the fire

That remade

Everything

I breathe new life

A Spring flower

Amidst the white frost

Of Winter 

Author's Note

As always, I am trying to improve. Please tell me what you think and how you would revise it.

Reviews

[garrshaw]

I enjoyed all of your poems Nanu. I only wished one thing were different:

In your first poem you have a stanza that begins "For we are both artists" ... I thought that stanza was not as good as you are capable of. What if you started with "And you are the dancer."?


You've got an excellent style of writing.

[Nanu]

Thank you, and that's actually something I keep looking over. I'm never to sure which way sounds and looks better. I'll edit it. Thank you.