Timely ice creams

~time stops for a while~

 Frozen like vanilla ice creams,

 with 

 oozing syrups--

 The time,

 it never really runs now,

 it slows,

 it walks, 

 it strides purposefully. 

 Like refrigerator airs

 On a summer day,

 It blows all at once.

 Like a cone of fluffy sweetness

 It drips ever so slowly.

 Like yellow sunshine

 Licked off fingers,

 Pink naughtiness

 Sprinkled with nuts,

 It oozes around me in

 Sweet, sticky, sour syrups 

 of love.

Author's Note

Just a fun poem. Review and tell me what you think of it.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

What a soft and delicate lament. Time. It has a way of moving so swiftly that we miss it as it just grazes by us, but it can move so very slowly that we feel as if we are susspended by it, unable and perhaps unwilling to relinquish ourselves from it. So beautiful and soulful. I love the metaphors you use, comparing time to Frozen Vanilla Ice Cream.

[Moonie]

Wow! Thank you for the brilliant words!

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome my friend

[John Anderson]

This is such an amazing poem

[Moonie]

Thank you very much for the lovely review. :))

[Bright Ocean Star]

oooo, fairest daughter...this one is deliciously descriptive and decidedly naughty. I'm not sure where you were going metaphorically, but I love the mystery in this poem....good job.

[Moonie]

Hahaha, "decidedly naughty" -- I was aiming for a children's poem!
I have missed your reviews, dear ocean star. Where have you been?

[Bright Ocean Star]

my house was struck by lightning and it took way too long for the telephone company to come out and rescue my lack of internet. Fried the wall socket and the internet router. I got out of the habit of playing on this piece of addictive hardware. I've missed you all so much, especially your wonderful work. Be well, fairest daughter.

[Einstein Noodle]

have to agree with Manal .. adorable, delicate and fun ... your poem piques my interest .. what moment in time was this muse?? ;)
E.

[Moonie]

Well, umm, just a ... moment.... no biggie! ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

TOUCHÉ. ..en guard!

[Matching Socks]

Mmmmmmmm. A very delicious poem.
I love when time pauses so sweetly.

[Moonie]

Who doesn't, dear?? ;)
Huh, only if time would always be this way--suspended in a sweet moment....

[Jennie Baron]

It's dreamy and even very sensual. Of course I like the ice cream metaphor! And it's well carried out throughout the poem. Very nice.

[Moonie]

Thank you, dearest Jennie ma'am!!:))
I can always leave it on you to make me smile with your sweet words.

[Daydreamer]

You're adorable! :)
delicate and fun read!

[Moonie]

That has to be the fastest review!:))

[Moonie]

And I AM adorable, ain't I? ;)

[Daydreamer]

Haahhaha! I reviewed when I saw it in the news feed, before the request xD
ahahahaha, be humble,my ferocious xx