Lost in the Blue

I wrote this for a friend , I used “ I “ so that when she reads it she feels as If she’s talking

Lost in the deep blue ocean

Lost in the wide blue sky

Lost in the  night

Lost in the sunlight

Lost in the Dark 

Lost in the Blue

I guess I need a rescue

 

A lying eyes , an empty promise

That’s what you’re known with

You made me feel like I’m living into you

But all this time , I was deeply lost in the blue

 

Confusion never let me go

And Somehow I always find loneliness on the road

So I walk alone on the railway

 

Feeling lost , feeling afraid

Of the unknown

Although I know I have my dear friend

I feel so alone  

 

I buried this scary silence , of loneliness

I drunk my tears

But I didn’t get a chance

To fight my fears

For this hole swallow my soul

Took me deep where I found myself … Lost in the blue

                                                                                              

Reviews

[William Liston]

Ah, this reads as a heartfelt, sincere message of one's sorrow and loneliness. It being written for a friend adds more to it, in my opinion, as it also shows compassion that you'd write this for someone else. To me, the repetition is the defining aspect of this piece as it conveys your point and leaves the reader to ponder your message.
Also, like the review below, I LOVE THE ANIME PHOTOS!!
Thank you for sharing.

- William Liston

[Black Jess]

I'm so happy that you liked it espacially the anime photo *-* . People buy gifts for their friends, for me, I do something more, I write for them, I show them my compassion by understanding their feelings . Thank you Will ' =)

[A daytime shooting star]

woaaaaaaaaaaah ANIME PHOTOS !!!
gosh !! I am so surprised Jess x')))

[Black Jess]

why are you so surprised ?! You never thought that I can actually do this ?? xD

[A daytime shooting star]

No at all 😂😂
Thanks dear
This really means a loooot for me

[Black Jess]

*-* I'm glad !