Whispers

A little whisper in my ear
told me about my fear
but another whisper in my heart
told about magic and art !
So i followed the latter ...

It said :
Let your kind words fly like a whisper
and enter everyone's soul
let your magic glow shinny and sparkle
to enchant lives and make them colorful

Have the heart and the mind of an adventurer
follow the woods' whisper, it will lead you home
Embrace the beauty and pace of nature
for it is the shelter wherever you go

be quite and listen to the silence
within the breezy air in the foggy mornings
and breath more than just air
feel it going inside your lungs
filling you with joy and hope

Slow down, feel
feel, in silence
because sometimes silence says the unspoken words

listen to the sounds of nature ( birds, leaves, water, rain...)
they are a beautiful melody for those who listen

fill your little book of whispers with memories from the heart
It will save the emotions deeply within its pages
and all you have to do to remember is '' feel '' 
because feelings are whispered in this magical book !

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

So poetic and steeped in nature. I really enjoy your lines Black Jess. " Slow down" , yes indeed. You need to, to take it all in so you don't miss anything.

Chris

[Black Jess]

You made my day with your comments Ma'ame ^^
Thank you so much ^_^

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome and it was my pleasure to read you :)

[Black Jess]

I invite you to read another two poems because I wrote a whole serie of poems about nature and they are included. it would mean a lot ^^
" soulful abstracts " and " beneath the whiffs "
Thank you

[Chris Shaw]

I am going out now, but will read them later this afternoon :)

[Black Jess]

Ohh thanks a lot =)
Have a nice day ^^

[Joey Nizz]

Your words here blew me away with the magnificence of the structure of this piece, very well done Jess, you truly have captured the essence of this writing.

Thank you for sharing.

[Black Jess]

Thank You ver much, your comment is very supportive
I'm glad you like it ^^

[Joey Nizz]

You are very much welcome friend ^.^

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A poetically smooth flow of words - a delight to read and an interesting subject to ponder upon; 'nature' and it's a powerful message that is all around us - if only we are willing to 'listen' - loved this write - ...:-)

[Black Jess]

Hello !
Thank you very much ^_^ I'm glad you liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the way you started the poem with words that captured my attention so easily. Nature is worth admiring and it fills one's heart with happiness and so much to write in the magical book :)

[Black Jess]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it ^^
It is indeed ! and I'm intending to publish a serie of poems and writing about it *-*
Be ready !

[Najam Us Saher]

That's great :)
Do tell me when you do so.
You are most welcome.

[Black Jess]

I wrote one before this, titled " My state of Mind " , and there's others to come... xD