Sounds of Nature

Here is the rain pouring

To refresh the old cold hard ground

And here comes the thunder striking

To turn the sky into grey cloud

And there goes the waved dancing

To crush into the rocks out loud

And there comes the birds singing

To awake us with their beautiful sound

And there comes the sun shining

To send its light all around

And there are the tress standing

High along with the mound

 

Climb the mountains

Chase the wind

Touch the sky

Dance in the rain

Reviews

[Javeria]

The symphony present in your poem is outstanding. You have explained the entire phenomena of rain fall in such a great detail it really makes me wonder that you're such a great observer of nature.

[Black Jess]

I think we only need eyes to see. Take for example the sky, it is never the same, everyday appears in a different beauty, sometimes cloudy, clear blue, with sunset colors and birds... It gives us leisure to ponder upon it, makes us feel so small, our worries vanish comparing to the extent of the sky and what lies beyond it far away in space...
And yet, how many people forget to see the sky in a day...
Paying attention to the beauty God placed it all around us, within us.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's all right there for the traveler to appreciate and view isn't it? I wonder why so few take advantage. Wonderful nature in all her bounty. I enjoyed reading your words.

[Black Jess]

Thank you, glad you like it !

[Chris Shaw]

Another descriptive poem about nature which evokes the senses. Sight, sound, touch. Nicely done.

Typo, in trees.

Chris