Rag doll

Forgotten by time

My rag doll is alone
Forgotten by my adolescence
Abandoned by my adult life

She cries in a toy box
Under the eyes of broken figurines

Reviews

[Ghost writer]

I like this, short, simple, sad, and yet you can see it so many ways

[Nebula]

Thank you very much

[Pete]

i like this quite a bit. it's dark but powerful and says a lot. kind of eerie too ... :)

[Velicity Phoenix]

Awe. I actually really like this. I have clicked on other submits to this contest; though short, I liked it. Put me in a whole different world if toys have feelings.

[Nebula]

Thank very much

[Abraham George]

in my childhood i didn't got a chance to have a Rag doll. Feel missing those days.
Lovely nostalgic creation.

[Nebula]

My nostalgia is a past happiness

Thanks Abraham George

[Jiya]

Short and crisp, i loved it!
It has a lot to say just in five lines.

[Nebula]

Thanks Jiya