Hanging Tree

I was listening to the song.

Are you, are you coming to the tree?

where we will hang,

side by side in glee,

our faces both frozen in happiness and greed

The greed for the perfect moment,

nothing but good memories, 

One by one we count,

we count those on the hanging tree

only jumping down when they have that perfect memory.

Its not selfish,

nor is it weak, 

its the gift of the hanging tree

Sorrow and pain is not a place for me,

nor is accepted from those who want to hang on the hanging tree.

Year by year they come, 

and swing with the wind's dancing routine, 

until they root, and fall though their necklace of glee

Their are two waiting for you and me, 

Are you, are you coming to the tree?

were we will hang,

side by side in glee,

our faces both frozen in happiness and glee

The ground will crunch from those who turns are done,

but one day we will fall and be with them,

its better to know them now, 

so come and be with.

we can make a perfect moment,

and fill our heads with nothing but good memories,

and then we can jump to the hanging tree,

please please come with me.

Are you, are you coming to the tree?

were we will hang,

side by side in glee,

our faces both frozen in happiness and glee

Are you, are you coming to the tree?

So then forever we can swing, 

Strange things have happened

Lying will not be your memory of me,

but once or twice, good things have come from this hanging tree

and another will come as we swing in deathly glee. 

 

Author's Note

I hope you like it, its not the best, but I do enjoy rough work at some points.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. The hanging tree. A interesting place to find ending with another. Nice flow of thoughts led to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

My favorite of yours!
I always love poems like this!!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[RiverRei]

I like this it got the song "The Hanging Tree" stuck in my head lol. I LOVE that song so by association I love your poem haha. It's depressing but such a good flow and word choice...amazing work, my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece of work! You are like the energizer bunny, keeps
going and going, I love it! I could never get enough of your work:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Octavious]

I am so glad that you enjoyed it. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Energizing bunny :) hehehe:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Well hold on to your hats! This got me laughing:) :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nice:) I like this:) There are few grammar issues, but hey, I'm not your English teacher ;-)
Well done!

[Octavious]

Thanks so much, I have a bad habit of forgetting to edit :)