Chapter 2: The Architect of Glass WallsA Chapter by Neha agrawal
If Chapter One teased us with a misdelivered confession, Chapter Two delivers its mirror: the man behind the voice, now fully onstage �" yet still, somehow, hiding.
It begins not with drama, but with order. Because Aarav Verma is a man who believes in structure. Steel beams. Uninterrupted glass. Emotional insulation disguised as elegance. You don’t notice the coldness of his world right away �" the pristine office, the crisp collar, the perfect coffee mug �" because he makes numbness look like refinement. But if you listen carefully, you’ll hear it: A hum of something broken. Just beneath the silence. --- The elevator, of course, is no accident. It’s metaphor in motion �" ascending, but confined. Mirrors on every side. The kind of space where a man like Aarav can see himself, but never truly look. His reflection is neat, composed. The mug in his hand reads Espresso Yourself, though one suspects the man holding it hasn’t done that in years. Enter Rehan Ray. Friend. Partner. Occasional chaos agent. The kind of person who throws emotional grenades with a grin and doesn’t mind the fallout. > “You look like you haven’t slept in a week,” Rehan says, eyes scanning Aarav’s face like a blueprint that’s been redrafted too many times. > “Slept,” Aarav replies. “Just… emotionally jetlagged.” It’s a line delivered like a joke, but not really. That’s how Aarav speaks: like every sentence has an exit strategy. Rehan smirks. “Ah. So it’s one of those days. Should I cancel all our meetings and throw you into a sensory deprivation tank?” > “Too late,” Aarav mutters, voice too quiet to be playful. “Already living in one.” A pause. The elevator dings. The doors open �" but the silence between them lingers, dense as fog. --- Upstairs, the Verma & Ray office gleams with modern arrogance. Glass everywhere. Clean lines. Unsmiling plants. Interns pretending not to be panicking. But today, Aarav’s chaos is not in the layout. It’s in the manila folder placed squarely at the center of his meticulously clean desk. He opens it, expecting project specs. Instead, he finds his past. Printed. Numbered. Exposed. --- > Transcript �" Session 12 �" Confidential Client: Aarav V. The words are familiar. Hauntingly so. AARAV (in transcript): > “It’s like… I’m watching my life through glass.” And suddenly, so is the reader. This transcript isn’t therapeutic catharsis. It’s a crime scene �" clean and clinical, but soaked in guilt. > “Everything feels performed… The charming architect. The good son… I know how to disappear emotionally �" while sitting right next to someone.” These are not lines meant to be shared. They are fragments of a man mid-unravel. Evidence that he knows he’s broken �" but has no tools to fix it. The brilliance of this chapter lies in how it handles that realization: not with panic, but paralysis. Aarav doesn’t throw the folder. Doesn’t call anyone. He just stares. Eyes scanning a page he wrote with his mouth and never meant to read with his eyes. And then �" the final cut: > “I think your story deserves to be heard. �" I.S.” No threats. No blackmail. Just compassion. Terrifying, unwelcome compassion. --- The critic in us sees the genius here: a man terrified of vulnerability being handed the one thing he cannot process �" being seen and not judged. In a world where Aarav has engineered everything �" his image, his office, even his grief �" this anonymous note unbalances him more than any earthquake could. Because suddenly, he’s not just an architect. He’s a subject. Someone’s story. And worse �" someone’s hope. --- He rereads the note. Once. Twice. Then folds the transcript. Carefully. As if it might shatter. Rehan pops into the doorway a moment later, coffee in one hand, sarcasm in the other. > “You good?” “Yeah.” “You sure? You look like someone dropped a ghost on your desk.” Aarav glances at the file. > “Something like that" Aarav is no longer the man who simply feels nothing. He is the man who remembers everything but says nothing. And now, the silence has been broken. Not by him. But by the woman with the wrong inbox… And a dangerous instinct for the truth. © 2025 Neha agrawalReviews
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