A Way To Remember

I hated the way I loved you ......

I hated all the times I remembered you......

The long,sweet,poetic chats....

Do it really bothers you now?????

I knew already that love is pain....

and though it hurts I cant explain...

The trust,the beauty, u used to see in me...

your fake complements,

to which I was used to be....

Now I cant judge people by their talks...

and I know too....somebody comes in life and just silently walks....

You just have to say it once or twice...

I can rebound the heart..the one you sliced....

so here I try to forget you again ....

the more I miss you... like the desert misses the rain....

                             - //€|-|@

Author's Note

Honest review please

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Your title describes poetry perfectly in four words. It is a way to reflect, to remember and by writing it down we are cementing a particular moment or feeling we once had and contemplating how we felt and what it meant to us.

I feel the ellipsis may have been overused; I understand that it allows a thought to carried on and further meditation to be given to it, however if there are too many it can lessen their existence in the first place. Nevertheless, this is only my opinion and I do not pretend to know anything in regards to your intentions or how you wanted the poem to appear visually.

Your poem reminded me of that rawness that can only be associated with a first love. Again, this is mere speculation and please correct me if I am wrong, but the questions seemed those that only a lover could answer.

[Nehuli]

Thank you so much Elizabeth for your honest review.
Ofcourse it was an old poem written in that "first love" phase.
I am going to upload more and please check them out as well.