The Way

~I think of a few years ago

~The way we used to talk....

~we both have grown a lot since then

~and somehow i still like you a lot ....

~The way you look at me

~ Sometimes making it hard to breathe

~ but when i look at you, i find the other half in me...
~The way you hold my hand 

~smiling, leg against mine 

~i felt just as free

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sweet and honest. A more simple write that gets out the emotions and thoughts that are held inside

[Masked writer]

Indeed!
Thankyou for ur insight
M.w

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Masked writer]

Your insight is indeed truthful

[Anita Frader]

Definitely romantic! It's got a sweet innocence to it. 💗

[Masked writer]

It was a sweet innocence, kinda lmaoo. The story to it is funny. But yes indeed sweet

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Very much enjoyed.

[emmajoygreen]

Memories that should remain: emotions genuine, lingering friendship - a sum of various parts, solution variable but at heart, hopeful! '.. when i look at you, i find the other half in me.'
Those are words people want to believe..

[Masked writer]

Yes! very much so.. thankyou
~m.w

[Chris Shaw]

Aw, romantically heart fluttering. I do like this poem and the memories it brings back. Oh to be a teen again.

Chris

[Masked writer]

Glad my writing has brought back memories for you.
Thankyou
~M.W

[Matthew Kult]

Poetically romantic, cutely sweet.

Good read

With love

Matthew

[Masked writer]

Thankyou Matthew.
MW

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those times when friendships gradually grow into something else...especially precious when over a long period of time like can grow into love.
j.

[Masked writer]

And so...i feel that is what it is becoming...

[Neville]

chosen at random .. but so glad I did .. it can be electric can't it that almost unfelt brush of a knee against your own .. the nearness of a scent remembered .. indeed, it is the way .. write on .. Neville

[Masked writer]

Thankyou, glad you liked it

[Dennis Wolf]

Memories from my teens.. Yeah, it was a great time to be alive despite all the difficulties, because there was someone worth all that affection waiting.

Or so I thought then heh.
We're still like best friends, I guess over the years we've figured out it's better this way.

Nicely written

[Masked writer]

Yes the teenage dream haha

[Dennis Wolf]

Suppose there's a reason they say "youth is wasted on the young"
Not that I'm sooooo much older now but it does seem kind of.. Foolish now.. Cute, but still Foolish.

And then again, maybe it'd be better if we've returned to that simplicity. Who really knows.

[Masked writer]

only we will once we are gone, to whereever we will go

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

hellos, Masked Writer,
I really like this one, the last line,makes the reader understand/ see
how special it is, :D ---Maynard