One way looking world

(Draft) (will need work to be longer)

In on lifetime there is always enough time

for one to love another

For love is like a river

and has its twists and turns

But you'll synchronize within it

when you least expect it

making yourself another current

in this one way looking world..

Author's Note

Please use this as an open verse challenge, im interestesd to see everyones thoughts on a one way looking world..

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Masked Writer,
there is a lot of time,
but when time catches,
another vision entails,
great write!

[Masked writer]

glad you liked it

[1809 Black Plague December]

I did, :D hope you expand it; it has a lot to entail :S

[Anita Frader]

Life only flows in one direction. Forward.
We leave things behind and move forward to new things

[Masked writer]

We may walk forward day in and day out...but some people still leave the trace of there evergoing foot prints.. in which the past tends to follow

[Anita Frader]

How true that is

[Masked writer]

indeed

[Ken Simm.]

Who said you only find love when you are not looking for it? And then only when you are looking for the exits.

[Masked writer]

Interesting perspective
~M.w

[Neville]

.. in an increasingly crazy, mixed up world that is getting not only hotter, but also smaller, I suggest that one never goes anywhere without at least a choice of exits .. Neville

[Masked writer]

Ooohhh I like that very fantastical

[Davidgeo]

The one way is forward I think.

[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work. Powerful.

[Masked writer]

Thankyou. Would you like to add to it seeming as its an open verse ive created?