Disaster

I put on a smile

I know its fake

Everyone knows

 

I put on my normal act

Sarcasm and the works

Everyone knows

 

I dance the way i always do

flamboyant in my own way

everyone knows

 

I walk alone on the pity road

and everyone knows

Im broken inside

Reviews

[Xtabber]

Wow, this is very good. I like the repetition. That last para is unexpected and a great payoff to the piece.

[sara!]

nice flow...the meaning is very true =)

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Good flow in your poem. A universal truth from one degree or another.