Friends parted

a goodbye to a dear friend

Time passed things were learned And now a new chapter's opened Life as once known now changed And yet the unknown is not the worst It's the parting of friends that brings sorrow My gaze turns to the ground as the first and dearest goes Pain beyond imagining sets in A hammer on a fragile face Goodbye friend, confidante, may we meet again one morrow

Reviews

[Dev]

I like the way you finished on the note of hope.. That you will meet your friend, confidante sometime in the future.. Well expressed emotions..

[Simple_mee]

It is actaully very good. The sadness and the pain is very well expressed. It is painful yet nohing less than a beauty. I particularly liked the way u wrapped it up so nicely in just a few lines. Nothing was missing....
Well done! ;)

[SPOTTEDPATH]

I thought it was really good.