my truth

once again i wrote this about my ex Kevin, you have to understand he was my first love, lover and and everything in between

My life is dark and dreary.
There's no breath within me,
Outside I'm smiling,
Inside I'm dieing.
Can you be the one to save me?
Living in an immortal state
you save me from this fate.
You came to sweep me off my
feet, to take me from this place.
How can I ever thank you, my words
are not enough so with this kiss I
give to you the only thing to me that's true.

Reviews

[Michael W. Farrelly]

Beautiful last couplet here. Nice.