my long lost secret

another one about Kevin

The secret I held close
made my world fall apart
The secret he let go
made my world crumble
I told you I loved you
And you said you did too
But in the end you tore your love away
In the end you said you didn’t love me
A few years later the truth comes out
I know now you really didn’t mean it
Somewhere in my heart
I know you still think of me
In my heart I still think of you
I guess the reason is;
I need closure
I need to hear the words “Goodbye”
In order to do that I will say them first
Goodbye, farewell, my first love
Goodbye, farewell, my long lost secret

Reviews

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He probably did/does love you and doesn't want to admit it because it's over. I like how you take the upper hand and bring closure here. There is so much honesty here and this is written very nicely!

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Wow! Love is it? It's hard to say those words to someone like that. I liked how the story flowed and they way you write the first couple of lines. The last part is very good, too.