i messed it all up

once again, this is about Lucis

Im sitting here in this empty house
Trying to tape my broken heart back together
It physicaly hurts when i see things that remind me of you
We didnt have much time to make memories
but the memories i have are enough to get me thru the day
I look at your picture and i see what i lost
I see the lips i once kissed
and the arms that once held me close
Now i just want you back
I want the love that i felt from you
I want the kisses you left on my lips
I simply want... you
but i know that wote happen
i messed it all up
there is no point of looking for and hopeing for
something that will never happen
I love you, I love you more than i can say
But its my fault i never should have left
but i guess this is my last good bye...

Reviews

[The Musings of Mary H.]

A large audience could relate to this, which is good! I enjoyed reading it and was overjoyed all of the works you have up already! Great write...and welcome!

Blessings,
Mary

[Valorie J. Shearer]

Very sad but good! Just FYI - spellcheck before posting, other than that.. welcome! I am really glad you are here.. take care~~~

[Shadows of Sight]

Sometimes being poor and in love, is better then being rich and unhappy....:)
found this typo: "but i know that wote happen" I think you meant "wont"
and hoping doesn't have an "e" :)
I hope things get better for you!
I love the way you express emotion. I Imagine what wonders your words would be, if they were happy!
Keep up the Fight! Heart is always a good reason.